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Should The Lost Symbol Stay Lost?

Thursday, October 22nd, 2009

TheLostSymbolTo start with, I really don’t like writing negative reviews. I just want to make that clear. You know, the old “if you don’t have something good to say…” The best thing I can say about the Lost Symbol by Dan Brown is that it has a great deal of interesting ideas about ancient themes. The worst thing I can say about it is that it’s horribly horribly written and edited. boring, repetitive and preachy.

Dan Brown has a lot in interesting insight and research tied up in these pages. But it’s hard to remember it with all the  plot dishonesty. He constantly plays unfair games with the reader, thinking it must be cute or cleaver to withhold information from the reader to build suspense. The way to build suspense is NOT to withhold information. You must tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth from the characters prospective. And no, I’m not talking about Malloc, I’m talking about Sato, who changes character half way through the book. Readers are willing to suspend judgment about whether something is possible, as long as the author is honest and tells the truth. If the author can’t tell the truth, he needs to rewrite the story so that he can. Example: Sato’s glowing briefcase, that we don’t know what it shows for hours. What a bunch of fertilizer.

Don’t even bother to read or listen to the last hour where Brown drones on about his obvious humanistic world view. It’s just a waste of time.

Again, the research is interesting. It’s hard to say how much I believe, since from what I do know he has gotten wrong. He refers to “Mormon baptisms of the dead.” What? Are you serious? Small error, big difference. That happens to be ‘baptisms for the dead’. BIG difference. Mormons don’t baptize dead people.

In fairness, Brown wasn’t making a negative comment about these baptisms, but it’s details like this that make all the research suspect.

In conclusion, I’m not saying that there aren’t worse written books out there, I’m sure there are. It’s just that I’ve never read one.

Memiary: journaling for the 21st century

Sunday, December 21st, 2008

For years I have gone in and out of journal writing stages, especially when I hit the computer age. I am constantly torn between the old tried and true book journal, or the convenience and speed of the computer. A paper journal is so linear that it is easier to focus ones thought.  The computer is powerful with spell checking, searches, formatting. Well now I have found a third option, Memiary.

It’s not meant as a replacement to either method, unless you are satisfied with the level of granularity it provides.

I came across this website (and optional iPhone app) that makes journaling easy and fun. Memiary is a website that allowed the user to enter five items each day.  The magic doesn’t happen all at once. It’s easy to think of the most important things that happen to you each day, but imagine looking back a year from now, or five or 50. Wouldn’t it be great to know what you did on this day 10 years ago. It only takes moments a day. I record things throughout the day, and polish them at the end of the day. But each person might have a different way of recording their day.

Signing up with the site is free, and the design is simple and beautifully designed. Go check it out.

The Price of Magic

Sunday, August 3rd, 2008

What’s The Price of Magic? It’s a “game” or exercise taught by Orson Scott Card at a writing class I attended in San Diego recently. The purpose of which is to define rules of a fantasy world where magic is possible. For magic to be possible, there is bound to be a price.

Uncle Orson’s writing class was a wonderful two day course that finished off my relaxing Southern California trip. The class was more than inspiring, it gave me some real world experience with the writing process.

OSC talked about everything from characterization and viewpoint to submitting manuscripts. It was fun and fascinating to learn from someone so intelligent and prolific. When I read OSC’s books I’m always amazed at his understanding of human nature. For anyone interested in the writing process, I highly recommend his class. Maybe if he does one next year I’ll try for his boot camp, an extended course whepre you write a complete story under his tutalage. Sounds fun, huh!?! What’s the price of magic? $175 and two days with a master of his craft.

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